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Author Topic: Multimedia Bonus Disc Beta 2 Released !!!  (Read 7233 times)
Dweeberkitty
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« Reply #15 on: December 29, 2007, 01:11:36 pm »

"Aim" and "aimed" are used in the same sentence at the "Audio" section, not a big one but perhaps one should be removed. Also a break line is missing to align it with the others.
"Are" is twice at the "Video" first line.

EDIT: oh, this is at the home page. BTW, what about Inkscape?

I'm working on Inkscape. It won't be in RC1 but RC2. I haven't put anything on the site about it yet but I will. Thanks for the proof reading.
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« Reply #16 on: December 30, 2007, 06:07:01 am »

Page Features:
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The Vector Linux Multimedia Bonus Disc consists of hundreds of packages aimed specifically at creative multimedia uses.

I think this would better be: aimed specifically at creative multimedia useRs.
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